I have to shake my head at this book.  It started off quite promising, but as I continued to read, the writing just didn’t hold up.  There were many editing errors, such as missing punctuation and capitalization.  While the story structure itself was good and engaging, the writing needed to be there in order to really back it up and keep the reader engaged.

This is one of those books where I would encourage the author to hire an editor because the story is good, it just needs to be polished and filled in.